jslvr4vr (![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} jslvr4vr) wrote,@ 2007-11-23 20:16:00 |
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| Current location: | Home computer writing |
| Current mood: |  thoughtful |
| Current music: | Idol winners |
| Entry tags: | 1/?, novel/story prologue |
Prologue
Okay here is a prologue of a story I'm trying to write. I own the plot and the girl so far. Anything else that seems the same I didn't try it. It is my writing. I'm wondering if someone would like to beta as I write. Please let me know off LJ on aira_silver@excite.com or 2118silver@excite.com. Thank you and just please let me know what you all think.
Okay my one and only character for now.
Lisera Sarah Rain Titanis: Dark blond hair, 5'1', Blue-Green eyes, Jeans and dark t-shirts Partly Wiccan (does spells and that's about it)
Prologue:
Shivering slightly though there was no wind the female cursed quietly. Glancing behind her the female shivered again. Moving forward she reached into her front pocket. Grasping the knife in there the girl moved even faster.
Finally she took off running. No one followed but the girl ran as if her life was leaving. Seeing the lights, she slowed a bit. By the time she got into the lights, which was a town, she was walking. Slowly the girl moved through the town. One hand on the knife, the female kept her eyes in front. She didn’t look back though she kept wanting to.
She finally turned down a darkened street. A glance had her seeing no one. Not wanting to just rely on site or sound she spoke softly.
“Open what is unseen
Beyond normal beings
Seek danger and let me know.”
There wasn’t a flash or anything like that. She could just tell everything was different. A look around this time also showed nothing. The female actually relaxed unlike before.
“A stop of previous open extras
Down to normal again.”
After that spell she moved into an abandoned building. It was an old unused room really. It might have been a school house but she didn’t know. Neither did she care. Inside the room she made light with a soft
“Fire low not bright.”
A glance and then she headed to the far wall. Not a thing hung there as she raised her hand. Her unfirey hand was placed against the wall, flat.
“Take me here,
Take me there,
Take me out of here.”
Pressing fully against the wall with her hand the girl disappeared. No one had noticed her entrance into the town and no one noticed her leave. She never was seen again in that town. She disappeared no one wondering where their daughter, sister, cousin, etc was. No one at all.
Can someone please tell me how to spell firey? Is it even a word? Or should I use some other word and what?
Now if I can just find and finish my NY story I'll be fine for now.
EDIT: This is copyrighted to Aira Silver 2007. Any thing close to another person's writing was not done on purpose. It is completely and totally my own.
